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Couldn't feel by ~closetpoet22:iconclosetpoet22:

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                   I couldn't feel the rain pouring down
                             My eyes had cried enough
                 I couldn't feel the sun blazing down on me
                     I've hidden from the pain for too long

                                 Why can't I feel?
                     Is it because you broke my heart?
                 You left me alone to pick up the pieces
                             From your sick game

                        You twisted me to fit the mold
                      To be who you wanted me to be
                     You lied to me and I believed you
                        How could you do this to me?
                            What did you do to me?

                            You played with my heart
                                  like it was a toy
                          Then you threw me away
                                   like the others
                          I was just a nother prize  
                    a new addition to your sick collection
                    Are you happy to know you hurt me?
                   Or have you forgotten me already..............
©2006-2009 ~closetpoet22
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Submitted: December 12, 2006
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ya it came to me during sciencs lol
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=meeden:iconmeeden: Dec 12, 2006, 6:07:15 PM
Nice - sounds very emotional :silentkitty:
Mood: Emotional ~closetpoet22:iconclosetpoet22: Dec 13, 2006, 4:10:19 PM
thank you very much its suposed to be [link]
Emotional

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Mood: Sadness ~nena9363:iconnena9363: Feb 1, 2007, 9:23:45 PM
wow...at one point in my life i felt this exact same way..sad times they were...

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~CalypticAugust:iconCalypticAugust: Mar 4, 2007, 7:31:06 PM
wow that was beautiful
keep writing pwease

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~bubblegum17:iconbubblegum17: Nov 29, 2007, 7:50:45 PM
aww, it's awesome!

it came to you during science? :crazy:
interesting.. lol. the things we think about when we're bored :shrug:

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